Shit storytelling

ebuu August 7, 2025 6:23 am

I never write reviews for stories despite the bad experience, but this experience is beyond frustrating. Not only does it have a confusing storytelling but it’s also hard to read. The speech bubble has a whole paragraph in it, the way its translated is so unnatural it felt like AI. And i also hate the fact that uke and seme barely have any scenes together and if they do they’re never alone, sasha is always in the room with them.

The storytelling execution was more stressful than the plot itself. 2/10

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