I genuinly enjoyed the story until MC's confinement. But the author didn't give a shit about this story from that point onwards. Everything went downhill.
The seme is annoyingly inconsistent just for plot's sake. A clearly crazy character has good reason to act inconsistent, but that's not the kind of character he is. He wasn't even a red flag until the plot suddenly needed him to be. He was possessive, but that's about it.
Author just made him lose ALL braincells when he got angry just so that MC would have a reason to mistrust him and leave. His accusations didn't make sense in the first place. He KNOWS how guiding works, and he knows MC doesn't.
Seme tells him multiple times he will not guide him without consent. Does so anyway later. Seme says the thing he fears the most is MC hating him, but conveniently post-rape says he doesn't care if he hates him. Seme doesn't care for MC's mental health, or he wouldn't have confined and raped him. But the whole fucking reason he even keeps the truth from MC is to protect his mental health.
Like, boi, make up your god damn mind! I bet you not even the author knows what seme really wants.
Then the whole memory drama was just an unnecessary mess.
MC made himself lose his memory with his ability, why did he not make himself remember the same way? Why did he not use his ability on seme to tell him? His ability is mind manipulation. Why can he suddenly give other people abilities at will? I thought the powers came from the fissure, not because people wished for them like Peter Pan.
But I guess otherwise his bro would've been a pointless character, because he conveniently got the ability from MC to see people's past, yknow, what 80% of the plot was about. But he didn't really have any relevancy aside from telling seme who the white haired guy is.
And the ending.... exists. Idk what else to say about it.
This had huge potential for a non-toxic guideverse story with seme guide and uke esper, but it went all to shit halfway through.
I genuinly enjoyed the story until MC's confinement. But the author didn't give a shit about this story from that point onwards. Everything went downhill.
The seme is annoyingly inconsistent just for plot's sake.
A clearly crazy character has good reason to act inconsistent, but that's not the kind of character he is. He wasn't even a red flag until the plot suddenly needed him to be. He was possessive, but that's about it.
Author just made him lose ALL braincells when he got angry just so that MC would have a reason to mistrust him and leave.
His accusations didn't make sense in the first place. He KNOWS how guiding works, and he knows MC doesn't.
Seme tells him multiple times he will not guide him without consent. Does so anyway later.
Seme says the thing he fears the most is MC hating him, but conveniently post-rape says he doesn't care if he hates him.
Seme doesn't care for MC's mental health, or he wouldn't have confined and raped him. But the whole fucking reason he even keeps the truth from MC is to protect his mental health.
Like, boi, make up your god damn mind! I bet you not even the author knows what seme really wants.
Then the whole memory drama was just an unnecessary mess.
MC made himself lose his memory with his ability, why did he not make himself remember the same way?
Why did he not use his ability on seme to tell him?
His ability is mind manipulation. Why can he suddenly give other people abilities at will?
I thought the powers came from the fissure, not because people wished for them like Peter Pan.
But I guess otherwise his bro would've been a pointless character, because he conveniently got the ability from MC to see people's past, yknow, what 80% of the plot was about. But he didn't really have any relevancy aside from telling seme who the white haired guy is.
And the ending.... exists. Idk what else to say about it.
This had huge potential for a non-toxic guideverse story with seme guide and uke esper, but it went all to shit halfway through.