Nothing wrong with romance but this was forced and rushed, lol his concerns did not sound ...

Nothing wrong with romance but this was forced and rushed, lol his concerns did not sound like “jealousy”. I think it would work better if they had time apart and she grows more as a person, I think they need to flesh her out more like it felt like she has nothing going on in her life besides following the MC, that’s why she feels more like a little sister than an equal