... This feels so rushed?? I'm just reading the officials rn, but they fuckin' on ch.10 already, which...????? I feel like I'm experiencing whiplash, and not in a good way. If they (artist/author) had spent at least some time fleshing out each character's feelings - albeit I guess it'll happen now - I wouldn't have felt so weird about the whole thing.
I missed reading about clues - something that gave away their pining, going beyond superficially glancing at the other across the room once. Something that has to/should be specific to their dynamic. It just feels so washed up, which is a shame, since the art is scrumptious.
... This feels so rushed?? I'm just reading the officials rn, but they fuckin' on ch.10 already, which...????? I feel like I'm experiencing whiplash, and not in a good way. If they (artist/author) had spent at least some time fleshing out each character's feelings - albeit I guess it'll happen now - I wouldn't have felt so weird about the whole thing.
I missed reading about clues - something that gave away their pining, going beyond superficially glancing at the other across the room once. Something that has to/should be specific to their dynamic. It just feels so washed up, which is a shame, since the art is scrumptious.