I really like mind reading settings, so this personally felt like a let down as it ended up being pretty unimportant to the plot (￣∇￣") it's a pretty cute story and an okay read all things considered, but the author glosses over the introduction of the plot and characters in favor of the ~fluff & ero~ and it makes the pacing super wonky in the first half. The second half is better on the pacing front, but the dialogue feels kind of... weird? Like, awkward in the "watching amateur actors that aren't being paid that well" kind of way... but the art is good, so it also feels really weird to think this. Maybe that's more of a me thing, tho. Who knows.
Anyway, again, it IS pretty cute, so I'd say it was worth it for the sweet moments. I'd love to see a plotless, fluffly story from author; they nail the cutesy-lovers vibe
I really like mind reading settings, so this personally felt like a let down as it ended up being pretty unimportant to the plot (￣∇￣") it's a pretty cute story and an okay read all things considered, but the author glosses over the introduction of the plot and characters in favor of the ~fluff & ero~ and it makes the pacing super wonky in the first half. The second half is better on the pacing front, but the dialogue feels kind of... weird? Like, awkward in the "watching amateur actors that aren't being paid that well" kind of way... but the art is good, so it also feels really weird to think this. Maybe that's more of a me thing, tho. Who knows.
Anyway, again, it IS pretty cute, so I'd say it was worth it for the sweet moments. I'd love to see a plotless, fluffly story from author; they nail the cutesy-lovers vibe