Shit 1. No bg whatsoever, like chapter 1 was it, that was the only background given, which gives us to 2 and 3 2. Shit world building 3 shit pacing 4.so much yet nothing has happened and its only the 6th 5. Youd expect fmc to be better, its technically her 3rd life now lol
The concept of her dying once and being resurrected(?) is cliche but good if handled properly. But it wasnt lol
Shit
1. No bg whatsoever, like chapter 1 was it, that was the only background given, which gives us to 2 and 3
2. Shit world building
3 shit pacing
4.so much yet nothing has happened and its only the 6th
5. Youd expect fmc to be better, its technically her 3rd life now lol
The concept of her dying once and being resurrected(?) is cliche but good if handled properly. But it wasnt lol