First of all, I almost had a brain aneurysm trying to read chapter 30. I mean... It was so dang bad I couldn't understand anything.
Secondly, the story is told in a way that is so confusing. Not to mention, the dialogues between characters there were so stilted and irrational at times. Made me thought a teenage girl was writing this story. Seriously, this story is like a teenage fluff. Nof a lot of depth, forced romance between Leah and Devan / Dane (honestly great plot armor, not much development was there), and just overall weak story telling (main premise is actually quite good ngl but the story-telling is the demise of this series).
Thirdly, facial expressions were poorly illustrated. It kind of reminded me of early days simulation game. They recycled certain expressions over and over again for various situations. Kind of disappointed that the visuals could not bring the depth of emotion in most of the scenes.
First of all, I almost had a brain aneurysm trying to read chapter 30. I mean... It was so dang bad I couldn't understand anything.
Secondly, the story is told in a way that is so confusing. Not to mention, the dialogues between characters there were so stilted and irrational at times. Made me thought a teenage girl was writing this story. Seriously, this story is like a teenage fluff. Nof a lot of depth, forced romance between Leah and Devan / Dane (honestly great plot armor, not much development was there), and just overall weak story telling (main premise is actually quite good ngl but the story-telling is the demise of this series).
Thirdly, facial expressions were poorly illustrated. It kind of reminded me of early days simulation game. They recycled certain expressions over and over again for various situations. Kind of disappointed that the visuals could not bring the depth of emotion in most of the scenes.
Not bad. And yet, not great.