Honestly my alternate idea really cooks
it’s a good idea in theory for sure but it doesn’t track with AJ or his character development, he only did so much for sharpe and the mission because he was promised freedom, the real genuine kind, he never wanted to get wrapped up in any of this much less shooting someone
Bro u expect too much from this writer/artist duo, better get used to it lol. The art is bomb and the concept of the story is cool but they always fumble the delivery. It just doesn't come out right. Check out their other works and you'll see what I mean.
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To the people who jumped me cuz of my last comment, I was talking from a writing perspective! Its just so cliche! Im a chronic reader and I forgot that on this yaoi based website rape enthusiasts are real common so a lot of yall may have gotten a tone of that from my comment. But really all Im saying is that it personally just feels cliche to me. You can think otherwise and thats fine. Its also fine if I think so. Again, all i wanted to point out w that comment was that i found it cliche; rape should NEVER be encouraged.
So you ask me to come up w something and ill write up smth.
In my alternate universe, what coud have happened is that mc shoots the guy and mr blondie witnesses it. They hide the crime together. Hide the body together. MC has character development. MC becomes STRONGER. TOGETHER, with mr blonde. Since they share this crime together, naturally they feel more of a connection = more CHEMISTRY. And ill have your mind come up with the rest. My point is, as much as I love this story, I would love to see it take a different route rather than a prince and princess needs saving type of romance cliche lol. But ill keep reading this anyway cause i like it nonetheless haha. Just my idea.