This is good, except I don't really like the Grand Duke and his connection with the MC is quite feeble. There's almost no spark even during sex, no tension whatsoever, just bland. No chemistry. If we talk about chemisty, the MC and his heroes have more chemistry than the MC and the Grand Duke himself. Maybe it's due to the fact that the Grand Duke is way too stoic and harsh for absolutely no reason. I also dislike how weak the MC is. Bro trembles and look absolutely weak after doing every minimal stuff that requires no ounce of strength from him, especially in early chaps. He's way too twinkified. I like the story, sure, but I'm hoping for character development for the MC and the Grand Duke.
This is good, except I don't really like the Grand Duke and his connection with the MC is quite feeble. There's almost no spark even during sex, no tension whatsoever, just bland. No chemistry. If we talk about chemisty, the MC and his heroes have more chemistry than the MC and the Grand Duke himself. Maybe it's due to the fact that the Grand Duke is way too stoic and harsh for absolutely no reason. I also dislike how weak the MC is. Bro trembles and look absolutely weak after doing every minimal stuff that requires no ounce of strength from him, especially in early chaps. He's way too twinkified. I like the story, sure, but I'm hoping for character development for the MC and the Grand Duke.