This one had surprisingly good action! I never expect much in that aspect from BLs as it's usually disappointing, but I liked plot and execution as much as their relationship. I was actually a bit annoyed everytime the action of the second part was interrupted by flashbacks of random sex scenes just for the sake of inserting smut for the readers. Also, is it just me or have some aspect of the story never been fleshed out properly? For example, the whole thing about Yeon-woo being brought in as that guy's toy and apparently having been sa'ed by him in the past, what exactly happened between them? The whole rape scene (which was also never addressed...?!) at ch.18 and him then suddenly wanting to kill Yeon-woo was also quite random. And what about the scars from torture on Yeon-woo's back? I don't think it was ever properly explained when or why he was tortured. Was it just part of the training? Or was it when he kind of rebelled wanting to see his sister? And also, what's the deal with that guy with a clear crush on the male lead?? He suddenly came in all cool saving Yeon-woo, only to randomly start acting bitchy towards him out of jealousy. That pissed me off a bit ngl. Like, the guy just almost freaking died, and it's not like he is forcing ml to help him and put himself in danger, let him be?? He was also a character that was introduced out of nowhere and didn't have much of a purpose, like the guy wanting to kill Yeon-woo (I mean the latter was part of the plot, but his relationship with Yeon-woo seemed a bit forced and then forgotten). Apart from these details I really liked the story, and I also liked the love the main couple had for each other (≧∀≦). I wasn't very fond of the male lead in the beginning, but after he realized his feelings he turned into the sweetest and most supportive boyfriend ever, I really didn't expect to like him as much as I did!
This one had surprisingly good action! I never expect much in that aspect from BLs as it's usually disappointing, but I liked plot and execution as much as their relationship. I was actually a bit annoyed everytime the action of the second part was interrupted by flashbacks of random sex scenes just for the sake of inserting smut for the readers.
Also, is it just me or have some aspect of the story never been fleshed out properly? For example, the whole thing about Yeon-woo being brought in as that guy's toy and apparently having been sa'ed by him in the past, what exactly happened between them? The whole rape scene (which was also never addressed...?!) at ch.18 and him then suddenly wanting to kill Yeon-woo was also quite random. And what about the scars from torture on Yeon-woo's back? I don't think it was ever properly explained when or why he was tortured. Was it just part of the training? Or was it when he kind of rebelled wanting to see his sister? And also, what's the deal with that guy with a clear crush on the male lead?? He suddenly came in all cool saving Yeon-woo, only to randomly start acting bitchy towards him out of jealousy. That pissed me off a bit ngl. Like, the guy just almost freaking died, and it's not like he is forcing ml to help him and put himself in danger, let him be?? He was also a character that was introduced out of nowhere and didn't have much of a purpose, like the guy wanting to kill Yeon-woo (I mean the latter was part of the plot, but his relationship with Yeon-woo seemed a bit forced and then forgotten).
Apart from these details I really liked the story, and I also liked the love the main couple had for each other (≧∀≦). I wasn't very fond of the male lead in the beginning, but after he realized his feelings he turned into the sweetest and most supportive boyfriend ever, I really didn't expect to like him as much as I did!