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Probably because it misses detailing and suspense.
The pace is also a bit weird. The scenes feel fast paced because there's barely anything to read and you can predict what happens which adds to being flat, but also slow because it just drags on with barely any context, or if there is context it's all over the place.
I’ve read fucked up stories and this is one of those but something about the pace of this story just didn’t “shock” or stir something in me as much other other fucked up stories like “Revenge/Reverse Thinking” did…