3 aparent weeks of Hwa young going crazy and starving himself, almost killing gyuwon, and it's all fixed with gyuwon saying "I'll never let you kill me" cause I'm pretty sure he thought the rest of that sentence -_- wtf? Then they start a whole ass angst plot where Hwa young is overpriced (more than usual) and gyuwon is self harming for pleasure and that is all fixed with another "it's okay" from gyuwon, so then after the trauma of literally almost killing gyuwon, Hwa young is instantly over it because gyuwon said so......this is fucking ass. And if the whole story was ass then at least the ending would match, but no. We know this author can write good stories which means they deliberately wrote this ending shotty and rushed, which as we can see is a huge mistake because 1st lesson in story telling is writing a good hook, plot, and ENDING because in the end (no pun intended) that's all that the reader will remember. And it's really sad how lots of good stories end like this because the author just didn't have the patience, creativity, or just didn't care enough to end their life's work decently
3 aparent weeks of Hwa young going crazy and starving himself, almost killing gyuwon, and it's all fixed with gyuwon saying "I'll never let you kill me" cause I'm pretty sure he thought the rest of that sentence -_- wtf? Then they start a whole ass angst plot where Hwa young is overpriced (more than usual) and gyuwon is self harming for pleasure and that is all fixed with another "it's okay" from gyuwon, so then after the trauma of literally almost killing gyuwon, Hwa young is instantly over it because gyuwon said so......this is fucking ass. And if the whole story was ass then at least the ending would match, but no. We know this author can write good stories which means they deliberately wrote this ending shotty and rushed, which as we can see is a huge mistake because 1st lesson in story telling is writing a good hook, plot, and ENDING because in the end (no pun intended) that's all that the reader will remember. And it's really sad how lots of good stories end like this because the author just didn't have the patience, creativity, or just didn't care enough to end their life's work decently