It felt moreBlackwatch? More like blacklist this was so bad. Normally I try to find good aspects but this was just ugh. From a writing POV 1) the kind of world this is doesn't get established until they suddenly start mentioning abilities, then you kinda just have to assume it's like temu MHA. 2) talk about a bad thief. What thief sits down to watch porn in a house they're robbing? 3) feels like author wants us to ship Ian and Jayden because "Ian never treated me like that" when Jayden being legit gang raped.
This was straight up fetish porn and it wasn't even hot because you mostly just watch uke get beaten up. Felt more like watching domestic violence, except the 2 leads aren't even a couple. It's just bad, reading the author's rape fantasy
It felt moreBlackwatch? More like blacklist this was so bad. Normally I try to find good aspects but this was just ugh. From a writing POV
1) the kind of world this is doesn't get established until they suddenly start mentioning abilities, then you kinda just have to assume it's like temu MHA.
2) talk about a bad thief. What thief sits down to watch porn in a house they're robbing?
3) feels like author wants us to ship Ian and Jayden because "Ian never treated me like that" when Jayden being legit gang raped.
This was straight up fetish porn and it wasn't even hot because you mostly just watch uke get beaten up. Felt more like watching domestic violence, except the 2 leads aren't even a couple. It's just bad, reading the author's rape fantasy