Responses
if a woman wrote this story, i would be a little surprised like come on girl
i’m HOPING a man wrote the story because i can be like “ugh yeah, typical men,” bc if a woman wrote this I’d be like “NOOOO POOKIE WHYYYYY, WHY YOU DOIN YOUR SISTERS LIKE THIS?!”
and the WILD amount of smut.. and her cringey as fuck outfits, i really like the design of the “twisted ones” and the overall premise is really neat. tbh i think this story could be good, the world is interesting, the MC has a cute color scheme and cool horns, a fun(ish) personality and there’s good chemistry w the ML(s). BUT her hypersexualization lowkey ruins it. like c’mon what the fck is she wearing 90% of the time? her biddies and are practically side characters with how much screen time they get.
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