This would’ve been better if it was 99% smut and 1% plot. No wonder all the ppl she’s ...

Irrational Hater August 15, 2025 7:28 am

This would’ve been better if it was 99% smut and 1% plot. No wonder all the ppl she’s dated left her, she’s slow and dumb as hell it’d be insufferable being next to her all day.

She stated the only reason she wants to go back to her world so desperately is bc she thinks he’s lying about his love for her and doesn’t want to be hurt first, so she’ll leave before she gets butthurt. Not once did she mention missing her family, friends, work, or mundane life.

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    Wanted_Slut August 15, 2025 11:04 am

    I mean if you actually read clearly, the plot is smut. The plot is her having a magical space time posay. Plus even if she hasnt metioned now her family/friends, she might do in the next chapters, remind you that its still the 9th chapter. Its still early. And wdym all that dated her left her when in the first chap she stated she havent had a single bf??

    Wanted_Slut August 15, 2025 5:03 pm
    I mean if you actually read clearly, the plot is smut. The plot is her having a magical space time posay. Plus even if she hasnt metioned now her family/friends, she might do in the next chapters, remind you th... Wanted_Slut

    Plus, He doesnt even know her that well, all he knows is that he likes the way she feels on him. Is that enough guarantee for you to live in a world where you can't be independent?

    Irrational Hater August 15, 2025 6:08 pm
    Plus, He doesnt even know her that well, all he knows is that he likes the way she feels on him. Is that enough guarantee for you to live in a world where you can't be independent? Wanted_Slut

    If this was all smut then every chapter, would be them fucking, her making a magic pussy makes this a smut plot point. Also, starting this I THOUGHT it was all smut and skimmed through all the talking. I was doing a lot of skimming as I soon found out. She might not have dated, but there was still a point made on how all the ppl she’s like left her or something like that.

    And sure she might mention family/friend(s) later as a reason to want to go back, but the fact that it’s not EVEN a second thought right now tells me all I need to know. Her main and only reason rn is she doesn’t wanna be hurt bc of her low self worth. And I remember he said he liked how she would whisper sweet things to the dildos aka him in addition to her pussy power that made his lonely ass catch feelings. But I underwhat you mean about how it’s not smart to trust a man so fast in sweet nothings, but then again, that’s plot I don’t want just SMUT