The story's really nice. Good plot. A female lead that keeps her resolve in her second life properly. A setting and plot development that leaves the reader really intrigued and wanting to know what will happen. And of course, beautiful art and characters (though I'm not exactly thrilled by the different skin tones assigned between the "villain" group and "hero" group so glaringly and perhaps so deliberately, I'd kick the author or artist in the face... or whoever's responsible for this imbecile decision, because that person definitely has... problems)
Aside from that GLARING issue, there are only just a few plot-related details that are off-putting about this: how we're left in doubt about whether the ML saw the FL's abuse in the past life (when he came to spy on them) and if he did, then if that actually means he ultimately did nothing to help (I mean, even if he's the one who turned back time for her... if it turns out in the past he was a passive spectator of her abuse, it wouldn't sit well with me how in THIS life, he'd go and tell her something like what he said to her already: "that he wants to see her cry"... Bc that would give this comment a whole new, aggravating meaning). Another thing, I'm a bit irked at how touchy-feely the ML is with her (and oblivious that he's feeling enough authentic sympathy and compassion to feel attracted, and not bc he wants to use her), and last, how idiotic it sounds that, for the sake of plot drama and to give the 3rd daughter some inane excuse to be shitty, the mother was for no reason made to decide to keep the secret from her 3rd daughter, that her oldest sister was in fact her full sister, when she could've just told her and made her keep the secret. That last one was just stupid.
The story's really nice. Good plot. A female lead that keeps her resolve in her second life properly. A setting and plot development that leaves the reader really intrigued and wanting to know what will happen. And of course, beautiful art and characters (though I'm not exactly thrilled by the different skin tones assigned between the "villain" group and "hero" group so glaringly and perhaps so deliberately, I'd kick the author or artist in the face... or whoever's responsible for this imbecile decision, because that person definitely has... problems)
Aside from that GLARING issue, there are only just a few plot-related details that are off-putting about this: how we're left in doubt about whether the ML saw the FL's abuse in the past life (when he came to spy on them) and if he did, then if that actually means he ultimately did nothing to help (I mean, even if he's the one who turned back time for her... if it turns out in the past he was a passive spectator of her abuse, it wouldn't sit well with me how in THIS life, he'd go and tell her something like what he said to her already: "that he wants to see her cry"... Bc that would give this comment a whole new, aggravating meaning). Another thing, I'm a bit irked at how touchy-feely the ML is with her (and oblivious that he's feeling enough authentic sympathy and compassion to feel attracted, and not bc he wants to use her), and last, how idiotic it sounds that, for the sake of plot drama and to give the 3rd daughter some inane excuse to be shitty, the mother was for no reason made to decide to keep the secret from her 3rd daughter, that her oldest sister was in fact her full sister, when she could've just told her and made her keep the secret. That last one was just stupid.