I'm sorry, but who wrote this? I have tolerance for reading sick shit and rape scenes, if the story is suspensful and interesting. So, who's idea was to write such detailed rape/torture scenes, and barely sprinkle actual story in between rape/torture scenes. If it's not every chapter, it's in every other chapter..... Author, it's okay to cut it short, to have it implied and just tell the actual story. Because at this point it's not horrorish, it's not shocking, it's just plain boring.
I'm sorry, but who wrote this? I have tolerance for reading sick shit and rape scenes, if the story is suspensful and interesting. So, who's idea was to write such detailed rape/torture scenes, and barely sprinkle actual story in between rape/torture scenes. If it's not every chapter, it's in every other chapter..... Author, it's okay to cut it short, to have it implied and just tell the actual story. Because at this point it's not horrorish, it's not shocking, it's just plain boring.