Before looking at the comments I felt bad saying that this sucks but I guess we can all agree that it is. Like what the heck even is that? I know (I think) it's a short story but I felt that the story was very compressed and like what kind of ending was that? I'd just prefer that the uke dying than that ass of an ending like wtf was that? I was like thinking this is dumb stupid shit it sucks. It looked promising.
Before looking at the comments I felt bad saying that this sucks but I guess we can all agree that it is. Like what the heck even is that? I know (I think) it's a short story but I felt that the story was very compressed and like what kind of ending was that? I'd just prefer that the uke dying than that ass of an ending like wtf was that? I was like thinking this is dumb stupid shit it sucks. It looked promising.