This doesn't deserve all that hate. It wasn't fully developed but there's a story there. M...

Delorus August 20, 2025 11:42 am

This doesn't deserve all that hate. It wasn't fully developed but there's a story there. Main couple had their issues but still cute. Bottom is kinda stupid and naive but there are people like that, he's not malicious just plain dumb because only a true idiot will stay friends with someone who manipulated him and sold him out. But I didn't like that the bottom assaulted top in his sleep and when top woke up, top did revenge sex as punishment... That's so wrong. But bottom doesn't have a clear view on sex, consent and relationships until much later...

First time that I hate a secondary couple so much. That glasses dude is a real pushover and kinda stupid. Like how can you still like someone who betrayed you, stole from you, used you, betrayed his friend and made him loose his job even if the friend was in the wrong too... Like glasses guy fell for him at first sight but they didn't have anything in common. Just sex lol I suppose glasses guy likes to be dominated by a jerk.

This is full of couples that can't be fully trusted... Very difficult to live like that but at least top knows that issue in their relationship and he's fine with bottom being the type of guy top can't feel safe... Glasses guy is an idiot, he didn't learn anything just accepted the dude back in his life without any apology or explanation.

And it would have helped to see the past of the characters. Like why the bottom felt the obligation to help his friend and be a spy? How they met? or what's the relationship between the top and blonde guy? Childhood friends? Neighbors? Top took him in because blonde had troubles with his family?

Still it was almost nice and a fast read.

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