I really enjoyed reading this. However, the ending felt rushed and there should have been ...

Yessie August 20, 2025 3:25 am

I really enjoyed reading this. However, the ending felt rushed and there should have been a few side stories.

All that craziness and what’s his name doesn’t get hurt, become broke, or put behind bars ?! I feel like we should’ve been able to truly see him fall into utter despair after loosing the fight. Also, I saw comments from several folks having a hard time keeping track of things. I got most of it but yeah, some parts were written a little inconsistently / confusing.

In the end, this was still a great read

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