They’re so ridiculously cute and loving, and this has some of the best smut scenes I’ve seen plus one of the best ML’s, but god I wish the author would just… slow down lmao. I’ve been thinking this since the beginning, but it felt like their transition into falling in love and dating and becoming emotionally attached happened near instantaneously because we didn’t get to see like any of their relationship develop besides sex. Sometimes drama can be good for character development, and it feels like their characters didn’t really face any drama within their relationship. Now we have legit speed-running where they get married over 2 chapters, have sex for 3, and go through the entire process of pregnancy to having twins in 1 chapter with no showing of the actual pregnancy process. I get wanting a short little romance bl with a lot of smut and fluff, but this art and these characters are way too good, so I really really wish it felt like their relationship developed and grew from something with more substance. The family stuff is great and really well done, but their relationship would be that much better and more impactful if its foundation had a little more depth besides sexual compatibility and attraction.
They’re so ridiculously cute and loving, and this has some of the best smut scenes I’ve seen plus one of the best ML’s, but god I wish the author would just… slow down lmao. I’ve been thinking this since the beginning, but it felt like their transition into falling in love and dating and becoming emotionally attached happened near instantaneously because we didn’t get to see like any of their relationship develop besides sex. Sometimes drama can be good for character development, and it feels like their characters didn’t really face any drama within their relationship. Now we have legit speed-running where they get married over 2 chapters, have sex for 3, and go through the entire process of pregnancy to having twins in 1 chapter with no showing of the actual pregnancy process. I get wanting a short little romance bl with a lot of smut and fluff, but this art and these characters are way too good, so I really really wish it felt like their relationship developed and grew from something with more substance. The family stuff is great and really well done, but their relationship would be that much better and more impactful if its foundation had a little more depth besides sexual compatibility and attraction.