So we jumpin jacks now that the back story has concluded?? Suddenly he realizes he's inlove with him just like that? what where and why did we get to that point when the only thing he has done is push and punch kim dan away?? Wheres the transition in that? The chemistry? The fluttering heart? Or is it all Stockholm syndrome?
Is this what you call fire writing for a character development?
So we jumpin jacks now that the back story has concluded?? Suddenly he realizes he's inlove with him just like that? what where and why did we get to that point when the only thing he has done is push and punch kim dan away?? Wheres the transition in that? The chemistry? The fluttering heart? Or is it all Stockholm syndrome?
Is this what you call fire writing for a character development?