this was an overall enjoyable read but the more i reflect on the plot im realizing….. why was the writing so bad the plot lowkey didn’t make any sense and every issue was solved by a convenient deus ex machina. characters aren’t well written either, their actions often make no sense based on what’s initially established TO THE READER several times and have such superficial reasoning/origin solely to drive conflict. idk if im being too critical but the manhwa insists on being taken seriously so i think my qualms are warranted. its just lazy writing. hopefully by the sequel the writer will have improved
this was an overall enjoyable read but the more i reflect on the plot im realizing….. why was the writing so bad the plot lowkey didn’t make any sense and every issue was solved by a convenient deus ex machina. characters aren’t well written either, their actions often make no sense based on what’s initially established TO THE READER several times and have such superficial reasoning/origin solely to drive conflict. idk if im being too critical but the manhwa insists on being taken seriously so i think my qualms are warranted. its just lazy writing. hopefully by the sequel the writer will have improved