i mean.. like.. it’s not great. it’s quite bland. has the hella possessive ML, overprotective bro, and the “villainous family” trope FL. idk what it is about this story that just has me like( ̄へ ̄)
like ma’am if ur bros attitude bothered you that much why didn’t you try to run away before? she was just like “yep my bro’s possessive, can’t escape the tower :(“ for her whole childhood. like babe- ur a “genius” like ur brother you could’ve found a hole in the towers barrier or straight up destroyed a side of it to escape and go out on the town. OR better yet, summon ur own fucking beast and use it to get out of the tower (like a bird or some shit). the FL lacks character. she just sorta exists, and now bc she has the ML on her side she’s like “NOW imma run away >:D” (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
Kinda, but i kind of get her too, i mean being alone out in a world youve really never seen can be hard, maybe scary...i might give it a little more time to see where it goes, now is when she needs to developed as a character
i mean.. like.. it’s not great. it’s quite bland. has the hella possessive ML, overprotective bro, and the “villainous family” trope FL. idk what it is about this story that just has me like( ̄へ ̄)
like ma’am if ur bros attitude bothered you that much why didn’t you try to run away before? she was just like “yep my bro’s possessive, can’t escape the tower :(“ for her whole childhood. like babe- ur a “genius” like ur brother you could’ve found a hole in the towers barrier or straight up destroyed a side of it to escape and go out on the town. OR better yet, summon ur own fucking beast and use it to get out of the tower (like a bird or some shit). the FL lacks character. she just sorta exists, and now bc she has the ML on her side she’s like “NOW imma run away >:D” (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ