There’s a lot of internal monologues, so we know exactly where the characters stand, but they themselves down. Mokwa admitted in this chapter that he learned a long time ago to keep things to himself, so I get him not being very vocal even when he has an aha! Moment, but what’s Nakwon’s excuse? He’s a major chatter bug and he’s already embarrassed himself in front of Mokwa multiple times, so it’s not that. One of them needs to talk to the other. Overall I like their dynamics and their lack of inter-communication is not annoying because it doesn’t really detract from the narrative, but I just think it’ll be nice if they knew each other’s thoughts more.
There’s a lot of internal monologues, so we know exactly where the characters stand, but they themselves down. Mokwa admitted in this chapter that he learned a long time ago to keep things to himself, so I get him not being very vocal even when he has an aha! Moment, but what’s Nakwon’s excuse? He’s a major chatter bug and he’s already embarrassed himself in front of Mokwa multiple times, so it’s not that. One of them needs to talk to the other.
Overall I like their dynamics and their lack of inter-communication is not annoying because it doesn’t really detract from the narrative, but I just think it’ll be nice if they knew each other’s thoughts more.