Messy. It feels like it has wanted to be one thing in that first chapter, then another in the second, then another in the 3rd and 4th, and yet another in this 5th, as if the writer can't decide… don't like it
Messy. It feels like it has wanted to be one thing in that first chapter, then another in the second, then another in the 3rd and 4th, and yet another in this 5th, as if the writer can't decide… don't like it