A bit amateurish, but not too bad

Fae August 26, 2025 5:06 am

I think they are still some plot holes not fully resolved (time leap trigger, Sora's first death?, the ending of those horrible parents) and the pacing towards the end was a bit rushed and anticlimactic. Could easily have been a 50+ hella mystery thriller but overall not too bad a read even if the execution is a bit amateurish. Wished there were more epilogues and side stories tho.

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