It felt like there were still some loose ends to tie up. What about the bakery couple? Did they know about the relationship? What was the secret request? Were they told to keep the past a secret? Is that why the wife seemed hostile when asked about things? I’ll have to reread sometime, but if felt like something was missing. Maybe a tiny bit rushed and anticlimactic, towards the end. Not bad though
It felt like there were still some loose ends to tie up. What about the bakery couple? Did they know about the relationship? What was the secret request? Were they told to keep the past a secret? Is that why the wife seemed hostile when asked about things? I’ll have to reread sometime, but if felt like something was missing. Maybe a tiny bit rushed and anticlimactic, towards the end. Not bad though