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I kind of wouldn’t mind the excessive sex scenes if the story didn’t have much of a plot. You know, like those stories that are primarily about sex- and the plot is really just there to string you along from sex scene to sex scene?
But the issue here, is that this is not one of the stories. Obviously this story has a very detailed plot with a lot of unraveling to do. There’s so many layers to this onion, and yet it’s like the author is determined to turn this onion into deep fried onion rings battered in cum.
i feel like half of the sex scenes could be cut off and maybe the story will have some sort of grounding then..... chapters and chapters on sex is kinda boring and off putting when there's a bigger plot at play here :/