Cute. But could have been condensed. Really didn’t need to be 10 chapters. The homophobic girls incident felt like a last-minute contrived drama suddenly thrown in to draw out the confessions. If anything, they could have made it a regular 5-6 chapters, and used the last four to focus on their relationship after getting together. Maybe giving us a sneak peak into life after their graduation/ entering college
Cute. But could have been condensed. Really didn’t need to be 10 chapters. The homophobic girls incident felt like a last-minute contrived drama suddenly thrown in to draw out the confessions. If anything, they could have made it a regular 5-6 chapters, and used the last four to focus on their relationship after getting together. Maybe giving us a sneak peak into life after their graduation/ entering college