This story might’ve been less like shit if the seme wasnt the literal embodiment of evil at the beginning. Then MAYBE the rest of his actions would’ve made sense. Are we forgetting how he treated omegas as less than human? The golf? You’re telling me all of a sudden he has sympathy after the bajillionth time the mc has a traumatizing encounter? And of course the uke falls in love with him. This shit doesnt add up. The constant surveillance was traumatizing enough on TOP of the ML promising the gremlins to gangr*pe him? It was just an endless back and forth zig-zag of fooling the other to fall in love, all with the uke having the short end of the stick.
And then POOF he’s a green flag and suddenly treats him well and doesnt wanna kill anyone anymore yay!… the motherfucker doesnt even properly apologize until the end? I’m not sure if he even fucking apologized? Didn’t even say “i love you” til the 66th chapter or dum shit??? I URGE y’all to consume quality fiction bc NO WAY ppl are crying over this piece of shit? Not that it wasnt sad at all in any capacity, it was just chasing after the redemption arc so hard when you can’t redeem this shit? Where was the redemption fr? The ML crying? Boo FUCKING hoo.
You would think after all the shit the uke went thru that shit would actually go down when nothing did. He held up his little revenge plan for 10 chapters max. Idk how y’all actualky shed tears at this shit bc it soon became evident that the author was just crossing off the list of trauma event after event without actually delving into shit and emotions PLUS the ml didn’t even pull off any real revenge for him at the end! Yay! What an amazing green flag!
Kinda wasted my night but I appreciated how the art improved toward the end at least. Didn’t make me terribly angry altho it did piss me off a fair amount.
This story might’ve been less like shit if the seme wasnt the literal embodiment of evil at the beginning. Then MAYBE the rest of his actions would’ve made sense. Are we forgetting how he treated omegas as less than human? The golf? You’re telling me all of a sudden he has sympathy after the bajillionth time the mc has a traumatizing encounter? And of course the uke falls in love with him. This shit doesnt add up. The constant surveillance was traumatizing enough on TOP of the ML promising the gremlins to gangr*pe him? It was just an endless back and forth zig-zag of fooling the other to fall in love, all with the uke having the short end of the stick.
And then POOF he’s a green flag and suddenly treats him well and doesnt wanna kill anyone anymore yay!… the motherfucker doesnt even properly apologize until the end? I’m not sure if he even fucking apologized? Didn’t even say “i love you” til the 66th chapter or dum shit??? I URGE y’all to consume quality fiction bc NO WAY ppl are crying over this piece of shit? Not that it wasnt sad at all in any capacity, it was just chasing after the redemption arc so hard when you can’t redeem this shit? Where was the redemption fr? The ML crying? Boo FUCKING hoo.
You would think after all the shit the uke went thru that shit would actually go down when nothing did. He held up his little revenge plan for 10 chapters max. Idk how y’all actualky shed tears at this shit bc it soon became evident that the author was just crossing off the list of trauma event after event without actually delving into shit and emotions PLUS the ml didn’t even pull off any real revenge for him at the end! Yay! What an amazing green flag!
Kinda wasted my night but I appreciated how the art improved toward the end at least. Didn’t make me terribly angry altho it did piss me off a fair amount.
3/10