Hm.

satorou August 31, 2025 3:43 pm

It feels rather lacking, the start of the story delivered more than I expected. Then when we got into the middle the story kinda wavered, I didn't see much relationship building between the two because MC was too focused and saving soliath.

I appreciate the focused story on soliath, and despite that they're always together it didn't really solidify how their relationship came to be.

Also I feel disconnected (from the start to the end) in how MC feels about ML, I wasn't sure when was he falling in love or like partially getting interested to the ML.

I do wish they took their time with the relationship building cause it kinda seems non existent, they did try to snuck it in with the whole "I'm gonna save soliath" Fiasco but they didn't deliver it well.

I really love this story though, cause it focused about an actual goal for the MC and they showed that, Not good enough for the relationship building though.

Responses
    satorou August 31, 2025 3:46 pm

    A rushed ending too

    shrike August 31, 2025 4:36 pm

    yeah the manhwa fucking speedran the novel

    Doppye August 31, 2025 11:32 pm

    Thank you for the analysis. This makes me want to re-read it.