This could have been ok if there was more time and the characters' actions made more sense. Like the suspicion was on the manager from the beginning, and Dawn saw that maid throw away the letter. He wasn't at all suspicious that they might've had something to do with it? And bro, how stupid do u gotta be to take the victim's wedding ring and then WEAR IT AROUND like think a little here. And the reason was so cheesy because we had no backstory so no emotional connection. Was also super weird to see Hames holding baby Dawn after we already saw Dawn fuck him, that felt really weird.
This could have been ok if there was more time and the characters' actions made more sense. Like the suspicion was on the manager from the beginning, and Dawn saw that maid throw away the letter. He wasn't at all suspicious that they might've had something to do with it? And bro, how stupid do u gotta be to take the victim's wedding ring and then WEAR IT AROUND like think a little here. And the reason was so cheesy because we had no backstory so no emotional connection. Was also super weird to see Hames holding baby Dawn after we already saw Dawn fuck him, that felt really weird.