okay the redemption arc could be a bit better but there was definitely some character deve...

chococol September 2, 2025 4:51 am

okay the redemption arc could be a bit better but there was definitely some character development. I especially like the way the omega starts showing more of a personality by the middle to the end of the story. I did not even want to read it at first but I ended up liking it.

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    I hate everything September 2, 2025 7:03 pm

    Already read it in one night bruh, it would be better if the uke didn't have pheromones effect from the pregnancy, the way he still can feel seme emotion/pain even after 3 months make it as if he didn't make any independent decision, bc we only see him being pregnant and getting influenced by the alpha's feeling. — and even during that, uke's basically getting tortured too bc he can feel seme's emotions during the arc lmao I want to see seme get his misery to at least make up for the past, but nah, author said "uke would feel seme's pain, no peace for him" the only peace he got is when he accepted his oppressor without asking for an apology. This story seriously has oppression fetish.

    Yeah I know uke already like him from the beginning, but I feel like it would be better if uke didn't get affected by the pheromones in after his 3 months pregnancy, I at least want him to experience being free as an omega in seclude place for even a brief moment, look for a friend or something, but nah, uke's entire personalities are really just an omega. Sorry for ranting in your comment lmao

    chococol September 3, 2025 12:02 am
    Already read it in one night bruh, it would be better if the uke didn't have pheromones effect from the pregnancy, the way he still can feel seme emotion/pain even after 3 months make it as if he didn't make an... I hate everything

    yes! I was craving for some revenge, but we got pretty much none.

    The BIGGEST hater September 3, 2025 6:12 am

    Y’all talk like the author is forcing you to read it or sum. Stop looking for redemption and drop this shitty story.

    The BIGGEST hater September 3, 2025 6:19 am
    Y’all talk like the author is forcing you to read it or sum. Stop looking for redemption and drop this shitty story. The BIGGEST hater

    *stop looking past all the bad to find the TINIEST bit of good