No substance in sight

Rev3ry September 2, 2025 6:48 am

Still to this day, feels like this is written by a 12 year old. I stopped caring about Keane and Onyx at least 80 chapters ago. Second pair is the only thing keeping me here, but barely.

Responses
    Lala September 8, 2025 2:51 am

    Fr, i think the author still has a lot to explore with the 1st couple but is not doing it, and these few chapters were boring & I hate the 2nd couple