"When i change my whole entire second gender just so i can be lubed up and ready when i rape my imprisoned little brother to apparently save his life" This is up there with; top 10 sentences that would put a victorian child in a coma
Other than how disgusting and ass the plot is - the writing was so bad, and had so many plot holes. The dialogue? Actual trash. The main character spoke like a reddit fedora guy trying to be mysterious The blondie? He is so one dimensional, an anime background character has more personality than him. Actually all the characters lack personality, i felt like i was eating sandpaper while reading their dialogue/thoughts Other than ALL that, it was extremely boring. This is what you get when you build a story on nothing but shock factors It's like someone took a bunch of dark romance tropes shoved them in a blender and made this ungodly creation. Its badly written, lacks any kind pizzaz, and frankly has the same vibe as a back alley pissed on vending machine (quick nasty cash grab)
And here i was getting giddy cuz the main character looked like Bruce Wayne
"When i change my whole entire second gender just so i can be lubed up and ready when i rape my imprisoned little brother to apparently save his life"
This is up there with; top 10 sentences that would put a victorian child in a coma
Other than how disgusting and ass the plot is - the writing was so bad, and had so many plot holes.
The dialogue? Actual trash.
The main character spoke like a reddit fedora guy trying to be mysterious
The blondie? He is so one dimensional, an anime background character has more personality than him.
Actually all the characters lack personality, i felt like i was eating sandpaper while reading their dialogue/thoughts
Other than ALL that, it was extremely boring.
This is what you get when you build a story on nothing but shock factors
It's like someone took a bunch of dark romance tropes shoved them in a blender and made this ungodly creation.
Its badly written, lacks any kind pizzaz, and frankly has the same vibe as a back alley pissed on vending machine (quick nasty cash grab)
And here i was getting giddy cuz the main character looked like Bruce Wayne