Disappointing

parkjinwife September 4, 2025 12:00 pm

Is this really from the same author as Pay Back? The art is poor, the storyline even poorer

Responses
    Morisagi September 4, 2025 6:05 pm

    And ur the poorest

    BungeeGum(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.) September 4, 2025 7:40 pm
    And ur the poorest Morisagi

    Sea anmon September 4, 2025 9:15 pm
    Law-RenzzZ September 5, 2025 4:37 pm

    If something's poor here then it must be you—both your face card and bank account. Wdym you had the audacity to leave an awful criticism when you're literally here reading it for FREE. You broke ho3

    parkjinwife September 6, 2025 4:21 am
    If something's poor here then it must be you—both your face card and bank account. Wdym you had the audacity to leave an awful criticism when you're literally here reading it for FREE. You broke ho3 Law-RenzzZ

    Ewww

    yousmell September 8, 2025 5:30 am
    If something's poor here then it must be you—both your face card and bank account. Wdym you had the audacity to leave an awful criticism when you're literally here reading it for FREE. You broke ho3 Law-RenzzZ

    This 5th grade ass insult

    fujo.senpai September 8, 2025 10:03 am
    If something's poor here then it must be you—both your face card and bank account. Wdym you had the audacity to leave an awful criticism when you're literally here reading it for FREE. You broke ho3 Law-RenzzZ

    Lmfao, he’s right tho. Sorry not sorry, this story is ASSS compared to everything else..that’s why i have my doubts too

    fujo.senpai September 8, 2025 10:03 am
    Lmfao, he’s right tho. Sorry not sorry, this story is ASSS compared to everything else..that’s why i have my doubts too fujo.senpai

    Oops, i meant they’re right

    Law-RenzzZ September 8, 2025 4:22 pm
    This 5th grade ass insult yousmell

    Something an uneducated out of school would say... Anyways....

    Law-RenzzZ September 8, 2025 4:23 pm
    Lmfao, he’s right tho. Sorry not sorry, this story is ASSS compared to everything else..that’s why i have my doubts too fujo.senpai

    He might be right but we don't have the rights to shove such criticisms when we're literally here pirating it.

    OneDayOnly September 8, 2025 4:45 pm
    He might be right but we don't have the rights to shove such criticisms when we're literally here pirating it. Law-RenzzZ

    Facts the audacity of some people, imagine stealing a Ps5 & ELDEN ring & then saying "who made this trash game"

    yousmell September 8, 2025 5:27 pm
    Something an uneducated out of school would say... Anyways.... Law-RenzzZ

    Uh huh ..

    Law-RenzzZ September 8, 2025 5:39 pm

    Oh it talks

    Law-RenzzZ September 8, 2025 5:43 pm
    Facts the audacity of some people, imagine stealing a Ps5 & ELDEN ring & then saying "who made this trash game" OneDayOnly

    Exactly. These thick faced h03s thinking their criticism are valid... like go to the official site, buy at least 1 chapter then y'all can talk.

    yousmell September 8, 2025 10:02 pm
    Exactly. These thick faced h03s thinking their criticism are valid... like go to the official site, buy at least 1 chapter then y'all can talk. Law-RenzzZ

    The fact that you’re calling people “hoes” over some slight criticism lmfao.. yeah you’re definitely a child lmfao, it’s never that serious to be talking to people the way you’re doing right now . Take a chill pill, breathe girl cause it is not that deep at all like?? Learn what the term hoe means before using it incorrectly dumb ass

    parkjinwife September 9, 2025 12:28 am
    The fact that you’re calling people “hoes” over some slight criticism lmfao.. yeah you’re definitely a child lmfao, it’s never that serious to be talking to people the way you’re doing right now . T... yousmell

    Obviously, these are children. Ill-behaved children too. Throwing tantrum doesn't take erase the fact that this is a bad story, especially for an experienced author.

    OneDayOnly September 9, 2025 6:19 am
    Obviously, these are children. Ill-behaved children too. Throwing tantrum doesn't take erase the fact that this is a bad story, especially for an experienced author. parkjinwife

    A child feels entitled to things ,just like you

    fujo.senpai September 9, 2025 7:06 am
    Something an uneducated out of school would say... Anyways.... Law-RenzzZ

    Sorry but based on your replies, you sound like you’re the uneducated one here. Calling out names all of a sudden feels childish. People are allowed to have opinions. There’s literally a rating system and a comment section….both meant for sharing how we feel about the story. You getting mad at someone for saying they don’t like it doesn’t make sense, especially when you’re here too. We’re all on the same site. The same site that has a rating system, a comment section, and many more. If it’s so wrong to share opinions, then what are you doing here? Keeping your thoughts to yourself is fine, but don’t expect everyone else to do the same since we’re in this site after all.

    OneDayOnly September 9, 2025 9:43 am
    Sorry but based on your replies, you sound like you’re the uneducated one here. Calling out names all of a sudden feels childish. People are allowed to have opinions. There’s literally a rating system and a... fujo.senpai

    All that yapping for stealing

    Law-RenzzZ September 9, 2025 4:09 pm
    Sorry but based on your replies, you sound like you’re the uneducated one here. Calling out names all of a sudden feels childish. People are allowed to have opinions. There’s literally a rating system and a... fujo.senpai

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