Here’s my two cents of opinions about this. “Amelia the level Zero Hero” The title is riding on the same wave of all the other like…”level 1 ranked” and similar stories. Here it is relevant, yet not. And it make sense for the kind the story they are trying to tell. There’s a ground of a good idea of a story.
I sort of like the protagonist, but, it lacks some depth. This issue I directly tied to ONE of MAIN ISSUE, which are the dialogues. They are a few alright exchange, but MOST OF DIALOGUES are not thought out enough, they lack a purpose, they lack and intention, they are repetitive, and some conversations seems want to say something, but they end up one sided and self conclusive. Pointless. Not even for jokes. . It repeats the pattern of “introducing the adversaries before their reality gets flipped upsidedown by the mc”. And it’s the same as hearing the same sentence over and over, or just having the same soup all day everyday.
The struggle of the mc against the system are interesting, but the whole world and plot is just setting the mc up to be a Hero anyway. I mean, it’s implied in the title. At this point, I believe the ultimate rebellion of the mc to break out of that fate imposed on her is to break the forth wall like Deadpool. (Would be funny) But she won’t, because she does have that “hero” mentality.
It has potential. But who wrote the story, is clearly inexperienced. The art is not bad, I give that.
Overall. This is a very very simple and linear story. And some action of some character, those too are not much thought out. Self absorbed conviction that have no regard of much else. Like the fight in ch.45… I don’t want to spoiler, but I want to bring up the memes about Dragon Ball where fights are in the desert and Western Superheroes that fights in cities.
Will I keep reading? Yes. I hope to see that potential that I feel to grow… Will I be disappointed? I’m used to that at this point.
Here’s my two cents of opinions about this.
“Amelia the level Zero Hero”
The title is riding on the same wave of all the other like…”level 1 ranked” and similar stories.
Here it is relevant, yet not. And it make sense for the kind the story they are trying to tell.
There’s a ground of a good idea of a story.
I sort of like the protagonist, but, it lacks some depth.
This issue I directly tied to ONE of MAIN ISSUE, which are the dialogues.
They are a few alright exchange, but MOST OF DIALOGUES are not thought out enough, they lack a purpose, they lack and intention, they are repetitive, and some conversations seems want to say something, but they end up one sided and self conclusive. Pointless. Not even for jokes.
.
It repeats the pattern of “introducing the adversaries before their reality gets flipped upsidedown by the mc”.
And it’s the same as hearing the same sentence over and over, or just having the same soup all day everyday.
The struggle of the mc against the system are interesting, but the whole world and plot is just setting the mc up to be a Hero anyway. I mean, it’s implied in the title.
At this point, I believe the ultimate rebellion of the mc to break out of that fate imposed on her is to break the forth wall like Deadpool. (Would be funny)
But she won’t, because she does have that “hero” mentality.
It has potential. But who wrote the story, is clearly inexperienced.
The art is not bad, I give that.
Overall. This is a very very simple and linear story. And some action of some character, those too are not much thought out. Self absorbed conviction that have no regard of much else. Like the fight in ch.45… I don’t want to spoiler, but I want to bring up the memes about Dragon Ball where fights are in the desert and Western Superheroes that fights in cities.
Will I keep reading? Yes. I hope to see that potential that I feel to grow…
Will I be disappointed? I’m used to that at this point.