i have so many problems with the story. first, why is the pacing so terrible? we have scenes that honestly need much more fleshing out, and perhaps even longer dialogue. Maybe its because they just didn’t really add much thought panels, but I really felt like it needed much more especially in the introduction. But even outside of this, why is the transition so bad?? I don’t think whoever created the panels understands how to make a manga because the panels feel a bit uncomfortable to look at because of how big it is. But ill leave it to benefit of the doubt and maybe its the uploader. But the transitions?? Like the one part where she gets harrassed by a dude, and then right after ml and mc immediately do the deed. The dialogue particularly flows, so it makes it look like they were talking in the street up until they weren’t. theres another panel where she avoids the ml, but its literally one or two panels when it would be better if it was split into 4, 3 being the avoiding and 1 being the large panel of confrontation. second, why is the sex so genuinely mid? Like the whole point of this was to look hot for people to read and fuss over ml, but its just so mid. you barely get any real dialogue when they actually do the deed, and nothing really makes sense nor is the way they do it hot. There’s no sexiness in both the male and female leads.
i have so many problems with the story.
first, why is the pacing so terrible? we have scenes that honestly need much more fleshing out, and perhaps even longer dialogue. Maybe its because they just didn’t really add much thought panels, but I really felt like it needed much more especially in the introduction. But even outside of this, why is the transition so bad?? I don’t think whoever created the panels understands how to make a manga because the panels feel a bit uncomfortable to look at because of how big it is. But ill leave it to benefit of the doubt and maybe its the uploader. But the transitions?? Like the one part where she gets harrassed by a dude, and then right after ml and mc immediately do the deed. The dialogue particularly flows, so it makes it look like they were talking in the street up until they weren’t. theres another panel where she avoids the ml, but its literally one or two panels when it would be better if it was split into 4, 3 being the avoiding and 1 being the large panel of confrontation.
second, why is the sex so genuinely mid? Like the whole point of this was to look hot for people to read and fuss over ml, but its just so mid. you barely get any real dialogue when they actually do the deed, and nothing really makes sense nor is the way they do it hot. There’s no sexiness in both the male and female leads.