I don’t understand why authors add in dubious consent/rape when it doesn’t even fit the character. Like the character will already be established and built up and then randomly in one or two panels we’re hit with rape? Like it doesn’t fit the character at all especially when after it happens within the next panel we’re back to the original set character almost as if nothing had happened leaving me in confusion because why was it added in the first place. I under in some stories because afterwards it actually effects the storyline but here it was so random especially with how they both went too their original character afterwards it left me with nothing but confusion.
Honestly the story is suprisingly good I have been enjoying it way more then I thought I would. It was just that one part I think it was ch10 for two or three panels that was so unnecessary and confusing that it brought it down from maybe a enjoyable short 5star for me to 4 to be honest. I wouldn’t say I don’t recommend because I really have enjoyed it but I would say just skip that one part if it is too much for you.
I have read stories with dubious consent before but this one left me with so much confusion because it felt like the author just threw that in there because they didn’t know what to do or they thought they needed a shock factor. My thing is it doesn’t fit his character he’s not one of those crazy ones that was locking her up and with a red flag attitude like in other stories. It happened and then they both acted like nothing happened they went back to talking like they usually do beforehand.Which left me so confused I went back to read it thinking I missed something.
*I’m sorry if there is a lot of grammar mistakes I tried my best.*
I don’t understand why authors add in dubious consent/rape when it doesn’t even fit the character. Like the character will already be established and built up and then randomly in one or two panels we’re hit with rape? Like it doesn’t fit the character at all especially when after it happens within the next panel we’re back to the original set character almost as if nothing had happened leaving me in confusion because why was it added in the first place. I under in some stories because afterwards it actually effects the storyline but here it was so random especially with how they both went too their original character afterwards it left me with nothing but confusion.
Honestly the story is suprisingly good I have been enjoying it way more then I thought I would. It was just that one part I think it was ch10 for two or three panels that was so unnecessary and confusing that it brought it down from maybe a enjoyable short 5star for me to 4 to be honest. I wouldn’t say I don’t recommend because I really have enjoyed it but I would say just skip that one part if it is too much for you.
I have read stories with dubious consent before but this one left me with so much confusion because it felt like the author just threw that in there because they didn’t know what to do or they thought they needed a shock factor. My thing is it doesn’t fit his character he’s not one of those crazy ones that was locking her up and with a red flag attitude like in other stories. It happened and then they both acted like nothing happened they went back to talking like they usually do beforehand.Which left me so confused I went back to read it thinking I missed something.
*I’m sorry if there is a lot of grammar mistakes I tried my best.*