I started reading this awhile ago and just got around to finishing it, and don’t get me wrong, it was good!! I loveeee the alpha x alpha trope and I love that Theo is built and doesn’t look like a twink. But the ending felt rushed, I could have had a couple more chapters seeing the Lanhers (however you spell it) rebuilt and had a bit more time with the kids, showing how Seth and Theo’s relationship has evolved now that they’re not seeing eachother consistently. I totally get that authors are kind of tied to a set number of chapters, but I really think the story could have benefited from some let down conclusion chapters.
I started reading this awhile ago and just got around to finishing it, and don’t get me wrong, it was good!! I loveeee the alpha x alpha trope and I love that Theo is built and doesn’t look like a twink. But the ending felt rushed, I could have had a couple more chapters seeing the Lanhers (however you spell it) rebuilt and had a bit more time with the kids, showing how Seth and Theo’s relationship has evolved now that they’re not seeing eachother consistently. I totally get that authors are kind of tied to a set number of chapters, but I really think the story could have benefited from some let down conclusion chapters.