I really think that this has potential and I'm still continuing with reading this. However...

Eyyyy September 8, 2025 2:53 pm

I really think that this has potential and I'm still continuing with reading this. However, I do believe that the build up towards MC's death was a little underwhelming. I think the suddenness of the invasion of the wyverns after all that build up about the tournament was a lil off to me.

The plot idea is really great though. First time to encounter it so I'm still hooked. They also did a great job with hinting about the twist in earlier chapters. It's the execution towards its revelation was when it started to be a lil off.

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