Everyone in this story sucks. It still could have been a good story, but it feels like the author tried to humanize even the most evil characters by making them *slightly less evil* eg. Dominic's revelation at the end, and that made it even worse. Just commit to your pos characters. A story can just be dark; it doesn't have to have forced moments of wholesomeness. Anyway, it gets 3 stars for holding my attention to the end I guess.
Everyone in this story sucks. It still could have been a good story, but it feels like the author tried to humanize even the most evil characters by making them *slightly less evil* eg. Dominic's revelation at the end, and that made it even worse. Just commit to your pos characters. A story can just be dark; it doesn't have to have forced moments of wholesomeness. Anyway, it gets 3 stars for holding my attention to the end I guess.