What the hell is this incoherent story?

Octavia34 September 9, 2025 4:20 am

I'm not even caught up yet. Only in the 40s rn. But holy hell. This story jumps around so much and leaves you wondering if incomplete chapters have been uploaded. But no, that's just how it is. Some things can be chalked up to possibly poor translations, but not everything, but what just happened takes the cake in this poorly thought out plot and timeline.

MC literally refuses to go back with the ML because he fears for the little boy and his mother's life. ML conceeds and leaves MC behind only to have him delivered to him a week later in full heat under the rise of having him sold to some old alpha who needs an alpha heir.
But, he still has no idea where the MCs mother is or the child?! IT WAS LITERALLY POINTLESS. He could have just taken the MC home with him by force, forced him not to take the suppressants, and been in the exact same situation. He still doesn't know where the mother and boy are, so they can still easily die because the MC is missing. Like..... What?!

This level of incoherently poor writing takes the cake for the bad writing I've seen recently. Not the worst thing I've ever read, but pretty damn near close. Like.... What?!

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