Am sorry but this story could have been better but the author did not put that much effort...

Raider September 11, 2025 5:41 am

Am sorry but this story could have been better but the author did not put that much effort in telling it correctly

- seme has obviously a mental disorder which was not treated as a child the parents just waited for him to make One friend and that's it... He's cured ...tff???and the uke never finds out like what??? .. He just mentions he was different as a child and that's it .

- there was Zero COMMUNICATION HERE!!! All was assuming this, assuming that, they were going around in circles thinking stupid shit that never happened, boys talk, communicate please.

-the uke was more worried about seme finding out about his stupid crush like tf?? Are they kids? What happened with being straight forward?? Right after they slept together that should have been crystal clear...they should have talked.

-I appreciate there was no grape here. One positive thing at least.

- uke needs to set some boundaries with the seme... Like for real, their relationship was toxic af.

- ending was rushed and made no sense at all, I hope there are side stories because if not am gonna be pissed. I need to see the some growth on them as individuals and as a couple.

-again the seme's mente health should have been addressed properly. I would have loved to see uke finding more about semes diagnose and try to understand more about it.

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