I read this story a while back in 5th grade then came back in recent years to reread it and still don’t like it. I hate the age gap between the two not only that but they grew up as siblings! I don’t remember if they’re related or not but it’s still wrong… another things is that the bottom is young asf and hasn’t experienced life outside of the island making him clueless and almost childlike. I hated his design to his lips looked like a fishes mouth anyways. The top was way older and knew that the bottom was inexperienced with life. I was also uncomfortable with them kissing and the bottom calling out “brother” while kissing him.
I read this story a while back in 5th grade then came back in recent years to reread it and still don’t like it. I hate the age gap between the two not only that but they grew up as siblings! I don’t remember if they’re related or not but it’s still wrong… another things is that the bottom is young asf and hasn’t experienced life outside of the island making him clueless and almost childlike. I hated his design to his lips looked like a fishes mouth anyways. The top was way older and knew that the bottom was inexperienced with life. I was also uncomfortable with them kissing and the bottom calling out “brother” while kissing him.