I like this story but I find the dialogue a bit stilted, so the characters kind of come off as somewhat inconsistent. I guess there isn't a whole lot of internal dialogue either, except a few thought bubbles, probs adds to the issue.
Also lol @ them having to climb up a ladder to a hovering helicopter.
I like this story but I find the dialogue a bit stilted, so the characters kind of come off as somewhat inconsistent. I guess there isn't a whole lot of internal dialogue either, except a few thought bubbles, probs adds to the issue.
Also lol @ them having to climb up a ladder to a hovering helicopter.