I was hooked by the cover however this really was a don't judge a book by its cover situation. I gave it a try for about five chapters before dropping it from how harrowing this was written.
What do you mean you had an exposé journalist main character that got delegated to a chief of.. whatever the plot place you in but none of it made sense and I'm aware you gotta put off some disbelief on fiction but you had such a good premise.
Child exploitation, a whole journalist character, a scummy organization and just bad government agencies and you did nothing and settled for.. a lackluster chemistry and caricature of tropes romance?
I honestly wouldn't be so disappointed if not for such an interesting premise that I could forgive the cat fishing with the art but having a journalist mc wail in distress at a laboratory experiment was the most cringe I've ever seen drawn this year so far.
I get it's the 'this agency is bad' moment but god it made my stomach flip in distain with how out of touch that scene was.
I was hooked by the cover however this really was a don't judge a book by its cover situation. I gave it a try for about five chapters before dropping it from how harrowing this was written.
What do you mean you had an exposé journalist main character that got delegated to a chief of.. whatever the plot place you in but none of it made sense and I'm aware you gotta put off some disbelief on fiction but you had such a good premise.
Child exploitation, a whole journalist character, a scummy organization and just bad government agencies and you did nothing and settled for.. a lackluster chemistry and caricature of tropes romance?
I honestly wouldn't be so disappointed if not for such an interesting premise that I could forgive the cat fishing with the art but having a journalist mc wail in distress at a laboratory experiment was the most cringe I've ever seen drawn this year so far.
I get it's the 'this agency is bad' moment but god it made my stomach flip in distain with how out of touch that scene was.