this is too much slowburn damn, and half of all the pages were showing nature and *chirp* *chirp* from birds... somehow disappointing for the waisted pages
the “wasted pages” are used for dramatic effect to emphasize the hesitation, pauses, them actually thinking about what they’re saying That’s how good story writing is
this is too much slowburn damn, and half of all the pages were showing nature and *chirp* *chirp* from birds... somehow disappointing for the waisted pages