The flow of story is not good, maybe it's the translation's fault. Topics keeps skipping from one to another. Some words are redundant or without cohesiveness, some parts are illogical esp to be very knowledgeable with just based on previously read books without having that particular book at hand (does she have a hyper photographic memory?).
The flow of story is not good, maybe it's the translation's fault. Topics keeps skipping from one to another. Some words are redundant or without cohesiveness, some parts are illogical esp to be very knowledgeable with just based on previously read books without having that particular book at hand (does she have a hyper photographic memory?).